Sitting down and getting feedback from the whole class was really helpful, but it was also really good to see it on a big screen myself. I noticed a few things that I wasn't happy with that I didn't notice whilst editing on a smaller screen. Without this opportunity I probably wouldn't have found out so I'm really glad and also thankful for all the feedback I received.
Feedback:
Strengths:
"That was sick"
"The pace was really good"
Areas For Improvement:
"The lip-sync was out a bit"
"There wasn't much lip synching in the middle"
"The balaclavas were a bit intimidating which might take away from the whole point of black people being innocently killed by police"
"The ending might work better if you wait until the music has stopped to do the BlackLivesMatter hashtag
Making these changes will help me get to a stage where my next feedback session can be with my target audience who can advise me on whether this suits the genre and whether the actual content fits
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