I held a hot desking session specifically to get feedback from my peers who understand media language and the codes and conventions of a music video.
Strengths:
Shots are in focus
Mis-en-scene reflects genre and artist
Good use of camera movement, which is contrasted by the still shots towards the end to create drama
Sub-genre of police brutality clear - especially towards the end
"Really home hitting and good"
High quality first draft
Areas for improvement:
Some shots have been over-edited and slowed down too much
Refine the quality of some of the shots
Review
Overall, I'm really pleased with the feedback, a lot of it was positive, and the negative comments were constructive and advised me on how I can improve.
Going on from this, I will organise a re-shoot of some of the shots, and refine my editing to make sure that the shots I slowed down aren't too jumpy or of low quality
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