First Edit of Music Video

My first edit of my music video is strong in some parts but weak in others.

I think the beginning is strong up until the middle where I feel I lost momentum and the camera work isn't as good and neither is the quality due to over-editing.

My favourite part is where the symbolism of police brutality comes up towards the end with the police car during the lyrics "baby girl just know your enemies" and the 'danger of death' sign during the lyrics "baby girl make sure you remember me" however I feel the music video around this area isn't as strong.

I really want my music video to be of high quality and to be strong throughout so I will be looking to arrange some feedback, and then based on that feedback I will be re-shooting certain areas to make sure this happens